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Started this discussion. Last reply by Rod Oct 3.

Started this discussion. Last reply by Loretta Leslie Mar 11.

halloween is coming up, do you bleed? Sep 18

I like that one but the allegory is tied in with the tree of good and evil so for myself it fails

October 9

Hi M, really like the way you have put this together... for me it provokes thought around "Begining again" but "now"... Cheers mate, R

October 3

Musealong added 2 discussions

October 1

September 22

At 9:09pm on September 17, 2009, Mindy said…: Hi Musealong,

How the h-ll are you? It's been awhile. Glad to see you back on!

Mindy

At 7:05am on October 2, 2008, Loretta Leslie said…: Hi Musealong

Thanks for the lovely new words - assonance, consonance, sonic.
If I ever knew them they were long forgotten.

I think there are examples of assonance in When Night ends both within lines and within verses (apart from the rhyme). I use alliteration regularly in much of my work too.

Outside all is quiet
The moon rides the sky
It’s inside me
The darkling thoughts fly

If that is what you are meaning

Shade No More and Life's Transient Beauty also have examples. Not much consonance - lol

I can see examples in your writing so I would be interested to know what you think about assonance and alliteration in each of the three poems.

How much of the poem needs to contain assonance, consonance and alliteration to be sonic? Have you posted any fully formed sonic poems on the site? (I haven't read all the postings prior to my joining so I appologise if have missed some of yours)

I would enjoy exploring the full sonic concept.

Loretta

At 12:31am on August 17, 2008, Rod said…: Hi M, did it take you long to get to know your way round in here? not being very computer/net wise battling a bit.

Texas time 12am+... Sunday? Mackay Oz 4.30pm Sunday... (be hard to catch huh? :-))... Been to the States 4 times loved it. R :-)

At 10:39pm on August 16, 2008, Rod said…: Hi Musealong, thanks for the welcome... things are great down here, just watched your countryman Phelps make history, "we" almost brought his mission undone, really great to see him achieve and go where no one else has been... should be a great inspiration for a poem Huh? :-) R

At 11:31am on June 19, 2008, Mindy said…: very, every interesting. Hope your summer is going as good as mine! Mindy

At 6:04pm on June 11, 2008, Rick Millen said…: Hello fellow Duluthian! It's finally getting warm here. Why'd you move?

What genre of poetry do you write in?: narrative, sonic, sometimes syllabic in places lyric

Have you ever had your poems published?: yes, on Lulu.com vanity publishing, 'cept you don't Have to buy but one book, called SteepleJack Beer download on the cheap for over a hundred pieces of my work

Would you like to have your poems featured on a future Midnight's Muse Podcast?: No

If you are interested in having your poems in a future podcast please give me a bio about yourself: a guy, just a guy, with a penchant for goldfish served raw ontop of a heaping pile of asparagus with holiday sauce